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[大魔鬼王] 【武林淫乱史】 第四部鹰扬京师 第七章宴无好宴 擒获妖姝

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我觉的楼主这章写的比较平淡．我建议楼主下次写书时别一下把人物都写出来，要让读者随着故事的发展而得到一个一个的惊喜，另外也可以有一些身份不同或者差异很大的人物，这样读者会更容易接受．谢谢楼主，给颗红心．
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